As many of you know, I published my first novel this year. It is a small novel, by a small guy. But it has gotten great reader response. And it has a really cool progressive message.
I just got my first review of the book, from the local progressive paper, The City Pulse. I wanted to share it with you guys. The reviewer seems to think I’ve created a pretty cool liberal hero, in the tradition of Atticus Finch, and I just have to share his kind words with as wide an audience as I can reach. So here it is in full:
Local Attorney’s Novel Rings Civil Rights Alarm
by Lawrence Cosentino“Direct Actions,” East Lansing lawyer Terry Olson’s self-published first novel, tackles what the author feels to be the defining issue of American politics: the erosion of civil rights in the wake of the Bush administration’s “war on terror.”
The novel’s plot is as topical, and as ominous to civil libertarians, as the phrase “homeland security.” Zeb, a young environmental activist, is caught sabotaging the construction site of an unpopular new retail development. It’s a crime, of course, but under the current political climate it’s also terrorism. The judge tosses the boy in jail without bond to await trial, branding his actions “treason,” and the legal wrangles begin.
“Direct Actions” follows public defender Jeremy Jefferson as he negotiates the shoals of USA Patriot Act-era law in a series of attempts to free the young man. Opportunists, demagogues, and assorted powers-that-be stand in his way, most notably an ambitious governor’s aide who stops at nothing to promote himself as a defender of the homeland. Jefferson’s life is further complicated by the attentions of a seductive journalist.
Olson tells this topical, fascinating story in plain prose that doesn’t get in the way of the book’s real meat: his insider’s knowledge of modern legal process. (He does allow himself the occasional hit of Mickey Spillane: “Jeremy could smell the fear oozing from him.”)
Following Jefferson on his day-to-day business, shuttling back and forth between cluttered offices, dirty prisons and dingy courtrooms, the reader begins to feel the sore feet, red eyes and bruised soul of a public defender.
Despite its topicality, “Direct Actions” belongs to a venerable novelistic tradition. Good-guy lawyers, noble liberals and rumpled small-town attorneys used to stand tall in novels like “To Kill a Mockingbird” and “Anatomy of a Murder.” People admired such men, and actors like Jimmy Stewart, Spencer Tracy or Gregory Peck played them in movies. Jeremy Jefferson is Olson’s attempt to bring this archetype back in the strident, public-relations-circus era of Jeffrey Fieger.
Some of the battles Jefferson faces are familiar. The novel makes it clear, for example, that money still talks in American law. “We have developed a justice system that is responsive to resources,” Olson says. “Although there are exceptions, you get what you pay for.”
But there are new obstacles facing those who would defend dissenters and civil dis-obeyers today. “People are being shouted down,” Olson says. “When I began this novel in 2004, you couldn’t even have a rational discussion about the war in Iraq or our treatment of detainees. This was a chance for me to sit down and share some of my thoughts on what is happening.”
The political message comes through clearly, but not stridently. For many readers the most satisfying thing about the novel is its wealth of everyday details about the criminal justice system.
Having worked for both the prosecution and the defense in small towns such as Howell, Olson was able to formulate a blow-by-blow description of messy legal proceedings.
In his account of a plea-bargain, for example, a prosecutor and defense attorney bat the alternatives back and forth as if they’re playing catch with a torn softball. “It’s scary to think people’s lives get hashed out in these little rooms, and there isn’t enough thought given to the process,” Olson says.
Are there folks out in Howell who will recognize themselves in Olson’s fictional Wabeno County? “Every writer writes from what he knows,” Olson says enigmatically.
Holy cow! Am I mistaken, or did he just subtly compare my book favorably to the work of Harper Lee and John Voelker (aka Robert Traver). I’m too excited not to share it.
I’ve read some things about Ayn Rand’s work, and how it took hold slowly and built a wide audience. While I’m almost one-hundred and eighty degrees away from Ms. Rand’s philosophy, I do take some hope in the way she marketed her book. Of course, these are far different times, so I’m not counting on anything. And I promise that if you hit the recommend button for publicity’s sake, and someday my novel gets Rand-like attention, I will not form a conservative cult with the profits. A progressive cult, well, hmmm, we’ll have to think about it. I’ll get back with you.
Signed a book every three minutes at appearance over the weekend. Ayn never mentioned writer’s cramp as a problem in starting a cult following. Damn secret conservatives.
Had to share review with the Pond. Will try to share at the big orange at 2:00pm EST, too, to reach the masses.
That is so cool! Congrats!
Is it as good as I think? Or am I deluding myself?
No delusion! This is wonderful, BJoe. And well deserved. I started your book and was loving it–great dialogue, terrific plot movement, really likable main character, and so refreshing to finally read an out-there leftie novel–when I got sidetracked by needing to read our next BooBooks book club book. But I’m eager to get back to yours.
Thanks Kansas. Hard to tell for me. You know. I am either reading too much into stuff, or being too critical. But I respect your opinion.
You didn’t say you were a “bestseller.” I haven’t started yours yet. But I can’t wait. It is next on list. I am struggling with time commitments to read Pure and Radiant Heart. I’m starting to get into the plot and enjoying it. But I don’t think there is any way in hell I will have it finished before Sat. I need an agent. Doing own PR and crap is murder. Radio spot this week and another signing. Signing this Saturday went gangbusters. Sold one every three minutes I was at the mall. Blech! The mall. On Black Friday.
Thanks for encouragement. I look forward to making a conference with you one day soon. I need tips. π Adios for now.
I am truly impressed with how well you’re doing and all of it on your own. It’s really hard work and takes nerve and stamina. You may well need an agent (if you want to contact mine, e me), but an agent won’t help you with the stuff you’re doing now. For that, you need a big time publisher who gets its marketing and publicity departments behind you and arranges and pays for all of it. And then they will drive you crazy in their own special ways. π
p.s. I’m not really a bestseller. One week, with one book, on the LA Times list only counts on book jackets. π
Counts in my book. I bet Batshit Loopy would nickname you “Big Time” if you were on the White House press corps.
Kansas is being waaaay to modest….as for writing tips I know she has a book called ‘Seven Steps on a Writers Path’ about tips on how to write a book…might be interesting for you pick up Terry. I know I want to get cause I’ll read anything by Kansas and it sounds interesting anyway.
Kansas is soooo modest. I can’t wait to get to her book. It is calling my name from the shelf. I so think we should do her book for Boo Books. A one time exception. Let’s do The Whole Truth for the next session. Not as a way to get my book onto Boo Books (I am not that calculating). But because we all love Kansas. Don’t forget. Write in campaign when we get the next vote.
Another published author?!
I didn’t know. And you have a another NEW book out?!
Would you share the title please?
Thank you.
I don’t know if Kansas has a new one out just now. But if a book can be judged by its cover, I’d suggest “The Whole Truth.”
I recommend The Whole Truth MOST highly!! I then suggest reading The Ring of Truth and The Truth Hurts immediately thereafter!! I did, and it was the one of the most awesome 4 days of my life!
lol
I cried at the end of The Truth Hurts, not from sadness, but from inspiration, you kow the kind that comes with goosebumps?? I got teary during Direct Actions too, but you’ll have to wait for the review for more detail!
We have a book club? What are we reading?
Oh yeah. A new member for BooBooks. Kansas is in charge, if I’m not mistaken. The book for this month is “Oh Pure and Radiant Heart” by Lydia Millet. You can order through Powells.com on this site (it helps BooMan). The book club posts run all weekend, this weekend, if I’ve got my schedule right (and my schedule is a little hazy because I am running all over). And I believe even those, like me, who haven’t started or finished the book are welcome.
I think most public libraries have it as well. (that’s where I got my copy)
Excellent point katiebird. I’ve gotten so burgeois trying to sell this book. Almost forgot about the best bookstore in the world. The local public library (where the FBI can watch what you are reading, and put the librarian in jail if she whispers to you that you’re being watched).
Hm. Library has it but apparently they haven’t shelved it yet. It’s a new copy I guess. Drat.
Can you call and ask a librarian to hold it for you (That used to be one of my jobs at another library. We did that for people ALL the time. Several hundred people a day).
You might explain that you’re trying to get ahold of it for this conversation. But, it really shouldn’t be considered any kind of a big deal.
Kansas,
For the Boo Books, is there a way to note (perhaps on the front page, BooMan or Susan, as a reminder?) what books are to be discussed? Is there a list of books a week or two ahead, in order to obtain, read said tome?
That is a very favorable review. Not a single hint of negativity in it. The reviewer clearly liked your work. Congratulations.
That was my sense too, but you never know. I am the worst judge of this book, and all things touching it.
That’s a really great review! Congratulations! Reminded me slightly of Sara Paretsky’s Blacklist which ties in civil liberties re the Patriot Act with McCarthyism. An obvious tie-in, clearly, but its nice to have mystery novels that do that.
Thanks. I didn’t really set out to write a mystery novel. But I guess that is what it turned out to be. So I am glad to push the agenda in this area.
Well, this review made me want to read the book, so there’s that.
Where do I get it?
The best feedback, I guess. Cool. It is at the Boo Store. Also Powells, I believe. And of course the normal web retailers.
Sounds good. I can’t wait to read it. But too busy now, I’m working on forming my own cult and you play a major role in it. You are my hero.
Have you written the screenplay yet? The masses love a movie.
A cult. Yeah. I hope it involves Meatball worship and progressive values.
I’ve had a couple of interesting contacts on film. One screenwriter in San Diego who is still reading book and might want to adapt it. Another film student who loves the book and wants to make an indy film of it and do it at Sundance. I’m holding out for John Cusack and Nicole Kidman (hehe, Ductape Fatwa said Hollywood would cast Brittnay Spears in the female lead wearing leather) at this point.
And we can plug the soundtrack album on Friday Night Jazz Jam! Some of our regulars then can give it actual over-the-air playtime, too.
The enteprenurial aspects are endless, Joe. You better not end up a freeper, though. Comparing yourself to Ayn Rand – even in jest – ugh! π
Seriously, though – congratulations and well deserved!
I promise. I will swear and anti-freeper loyalty oath. Completely want the Jazz Jam tie in promotion thing though.
I’ve been watching you for a while, young man. I’m very proud of you. You’re on your way now.
Remember, a mob’s always made up of people, no matter what.
Atticus is my absolute favorite character in the entire world. So I can’t help but love a writer with that screen name. Makes me feel like the real Atticus is watching. Are you the real Atticus? π
It all depends on your definition of ‘real.’ I am the Atticus for now. Don’t question a message from the spirit world. I’ll be in touch with you again.
There are two boys between the two fourth-grade classes at my son’s school whose first name is “Atticus.”
And one third-grader. Who’s a girl. No, I’m not kidding. “Atty” is what they call her.
So I’m not saying your handle has jumped the shark, but it’s lost some novelty at least around here…
If I had a boy, I think that might have been his name. Or maybe Keegan Fox. Seriously, though. Atticus. That character is so hallowed. That is my favorite novel, I think. It is hard to pick just one. But it so makes me cry in parts. The injustice, you know.
And for some reason i thought you were from… like… Boston or sumtin for some reason or other. East Lansing? Howell? I lived in Marshall over by Battle Creek for several years and my in-laws (and some of my cousins) are all out that way.
Mickey Spillane, huh? Not bad. Not bad. When does the movie come out?
Practically neighbors. No movie yet. Just fun, silly talk.
Oh BJ what a great review!
I’m ordering your book for the holidays – a treat I am looking forward too.
This is so exciting. When my kids were little I would always point out the author (and illustrator), saying with sincere awe, “This is the author. S/he wrote this book.”
To be able to say, “I met this author,” well, just adds to the thrill.
A suggestion to tuck away, consider contacting area high school civics/English teachers offering to speak to their classes about your book. My thought is that young people would benefit from your knowledge of both writing and the legal system and hearing your concern about our civil rights. Who knows, you might stimulate more activists – teachers and kids!
Congratulations!
Thanks tampopo. Hope you enjoy. I got to meet a young writer this weekend. It was very cool. We chatted, and he practically made his mom buy a copy. (The power of marketing to youth revealed). But it was one of the best experiences of this whole selling thing so far.
I’ll tuck away that thought about school. Too busy for now, but it is a wonderful suggestion. Hope all is well on the beat-Alito front. Looking forward to the battle.
Best,
oozing from me?
Even if they do (and they will) make it into a musical, with a corresponding line of Bratz doll costumes, you will always be able to remember that the book itself was for all practical purposes, compared to the work of Miss Harper Lee. π
Yeah. The reviewer was very subtle, wasn’t he. I liked that. But, yeah, for all practical purposes. Uhuh.
Musical and Bratz dolls. π Miss you, man, or woman. Haven’t crossed paths of late. Been hopping with holidays, etc. Hope you are hard on the trail, trying to take down other fascist-like state legislative proposals and the like.
What a most AWESOME review!! Well-deserved, every bit of it!
And now the review I was working on looks for shit….my husband is reading it right now (about 1/2 way through)…so far he likes it, even though (his words) “it’s the type of book I usually avoid like the plague.”
I said I’d have the review by Thanksgiving, but alas, I suck. I WILL post it before the end of the year though, I promise!!
I am so happy for you, Terry, really — when is the second one coming out? Does it have Zeb in it? Of course it has Jeffrey, right?
High fives and big grins!! Thanks for sharing with us!
Can’t wait for the reader-review. Hope you are posting it here. You could consider posting it at Barnes and Noble.com, too. I’ve got no reader reviews yet. π But I am like 384,253 in book ranking. With a bullet.
New book. No release date. I wouldn’t hold my breath for 2006. Promoting this through February. Then at least a couple of months editing. Then who knows with publishing. Yes it has Zeb. No, Jeremy has moved for book two, leaving the stage for the lesser known lawyers of Wabeno County to emerge. I am in love with the bad guy. And the new professor. And the guy who works for the state. And all the rest. God I love characters.
Hey boston, what a great review-I’m very excited for you. And gives a better review than I could..the only thing I would add is that I liked very much the Charlie Sage character and the love and respect between him and Jeremy….liked the little chess game touch also-that was fun. I also liked the fact that Jeremy followed Allie to another city due to her new job. Lawyer and reporter would seem to open up double the possibilities for story lines…or interconnecting story lines.
I don’t know if you new book has Charlie in it but I hope he is a reoccuring character…I’d kinda like to find out how things are going in the town he left and the characters that are still in Milton.
And it was really great to have the characters be tied into such a progressive attitude and have that incorporated into the story line without getting off track and making it sound preachy-very good balance of information yet keeping it a fun read.
I’m glad you enjoyed it. (And stop dissing your own writing — you are more modest than Kansas, I think — you could write anything you want, including great reviews — and if you stop beating up your own writing, I’ll never again use the word dis as a verb).
I loved the mentoring relationship between Charlie and Jeremy, too. It is the whole student-teacher/master-apprentice thing. Kind of a sacred relationship. Fun to explore in fiction.
I’m not going to name names on novel two yet. There is some carry over between characters and setting. But it is not a sequel. It is its own story. You’re just going to have to wait.
As I told you before. I think the review you quoted was right on. Allie Demming is also a heroic character that really sticks in my mind.
Anyway, if anyone on this thread hasn’t already bought and read the book, get after it! You’ll like it.
I think the BooSwarm helped BostonJoe’s diary about this at Daily Kos get on the recommended list. Go Joe!
More than helped. Thanks again guys. This is positively the best frog pond I’ve ever swam in.
Absolutely. Little green flipper prints all over the place.
I posted this comment in order to encourage orange readers, and it was immediately backed up by SallyCat, Cedwyn and BostonJoe. I do notice that when one BooTribber posts there, others jump right in to the same puddle.
Ribbet.
You guys are a heck of a Swarm. The kind that chases farmers from tractors and into the creek. I really liked that comment. Made me feel special. π
Cosentio’s review is great! Good goin’ B Joe.
I’ve read Direct Action and I highly recommend it. I’m very much looking forward to more “direct action” in the sequels.
Update with a link to DKos and I’ll recommend there too, as I usually wait for a BT tip-off for an excuse to travel to orangeland.
Thanks again ND Dem. Can’t wait for Fargo. Hope you’ve got some icy ponds to take a “polar bear” dib in come January or February.
Joe,
I’m glad to be able to say I shook your hand before you went and got yourself famous ;o)
You should be crazy proud of yourself.
Rubbin elbows with the big boys! and girls! ;o)
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We’re not worthy!
We’re not worthy!
You goofball. This is nothing. It’s not like I’m Scooter Libby or something, selling my novel on e-bay for five digits. Shoot.
Thanks though. And I look forward to more gatherings under the cool flag. Maybe the war is gonna end before we get to do it again, but we’ll have to find a new cause.
And well deserved. I read it straight through one weekend–an honor usually reserved for Scott Turow and Harry Potter.
I would love it if you could post a “BooBooks Bonus” diary sometime in which we readers could bombard you with questions. I have some that I don’t want to ask here because of the “spoiler” factor.
This is a really good idea. So far I’ve only gotten to ask BJ if his cover is green because of his ties to the Pond. .
Just shoot me an e-mail. I’ll answer anything. Within reason.
Nope, no good. Has to be a group Q & A & discussion.
Okay. Anything you want. Just tell me the time and place, and what you want me to do. I wouldn’t leave you hanging.
Hey. Thanks for reading it straight through. That is the best praise in my book.
I’m accessible. Just shoot me an e-mail. I’ll answer anything for you guys.
I bought a copy– tap tap tapping paw til it gets here.
Thank you. Hope it comes fast. I am antsy waiting for your feedback. π
Way to go BostonJoe! Good to hear about your mall day success as well. Got mine at the Boostore, but haven’t had a chance to read it yet. Life’s been crazy. I recommended over at Kos, and you were climbing the list. Hope that generates some sales for you.
Thanks for the recommend KMc. I don’t supposed I should get so worked up for a silly little review. But I am bursting. Trying to learn that art is something you put in the world, and some will like it and some will hate it, and that the process is the thing. But it is a hard lesson. I’m getting there.
You’re most welcome. Good reviews are a treasure and should be cherished and celebrated, especially since they will later provide emotional armor against any bad ones. You are taking a paper copy of this review with all the relevant identifiers and sticking it into a nice little folder marked good reviews, right? I ask because it never occurred to me with my first positive review until an older and more experienced writer, told me to do just that. She also told me to make doubly sure to file away all good electronic reviews since they have a way of vanishing. A good review can help sell the next book and provide future cover quotes among other useful promotional possibilities. You’ve got every right to be completely tickled about this one. It’s golden.
Thanks for tip. And I’m tickled. π
I got my copy from the Boostore, too. (And Leocat honored it by NOT chewing the corners as is her habit). I’m about 1/3rd through, resisting my urge to read the last chapter first.
Oh, and do you have something against SE Michigan? Why no Detroit area appearances? Don’t you have a visa for travel to Detroit? (Sorry, that’s a reprise of a snark to dhinmi about where to have a social for kossacks in Michigan this past summer.) Afraid of cutting into Elmore Leonard turf over this way?
Now, you probably came over in this direction and I totally missed it.
I haven’t been there yet. I’m slowly circling my way out from Lansing. With stops in hometown and my old workplace first. But I’ve a feeling I will be getting into Detroit area soon. Maybe January.
Very nice of Leocat. Though I do love a good hard-read copy of the book. I like to dog-ear my pages, and write in a book. You know. Own it. Had a kid who read my book and brought his copy (all beat to shit) to my signing. And, I tell you, that was the best thing.
Yes, well, I’m guilty of being a book-destroyer as well. An unmarked book is a book either enshrined as an extra copy, a terrible book, or yet-to-be-read book. Or some execrable thing my Aunt Smedley gave me and expects to see displayed prominently on her visits. Otherwise, pen, pencil, flags, etc.
And when I’m very tired by cannot sleep, I will translate passages (mentally) into Spanish, or copy edit (did that for a short while to get extra bucks in college). That also tends to mess up a book.
But I put yours down because I can’t stand to read a mystery of any sort bit by bit, have to have time to read it in a gulp, and that gulp of time won’t be here until Christmas.
Okay then. Until Christmas it is. π
Congrats again Terry: Fingers are still crossed that your book will take off!
Where can it go really? You know. It isn’t backed by Time Warner, or anything. But I’m having a pretty good week. Thanks for support keepinon.
pretty good is, well…pretty good in my book! (oops, that’s YOUR book)
I’m very inspired. To buy the book. To act more like this in my own law practice. To write my own damn brilliant first novel! Thanks for this wonderful post.
Thanks a lot. I was asked about lawyers being the butt of jokes in my first radio interview. And I had a pretty good moment. I thought of Fitz. And kind of shifted the talk from morning-show-ha-ha to a serious discussion of attorney ethics and lawyers being revered figures in the community. And from all accounts I heard afterward, people liked what I said. (I think I got almost twenty minutes of air time — from a promise of five minutes). Very cool. We lawyers have a big role to play in making the world a better place. A place we imagine. That I may inspire you to that is a really cool thing to hear. Knock ’em dead out there.
Way to go, Terry!
Have you spoken with an agent yet? I’m serious; if you can show an agent positive reviews and good sales numbers, s/he might be inclined to see if s/he can shop your book around to a larger publisher.
And keep this thought in mind: With a background of two technical articles and the memory of reading about a Soviet naval sub skipper who defected to the US (if memory serves me right), Tom Clancy put together a manuscript for The Hunt For Red October and you know what happened then.
And once you’re earning six-figure advances we can all say we knew you when. π
Agent? Ha! In my dreams. Larger publisher. Ha!Ha! In my wildest dreams. Six-figure advances. Ha!ha!ha! In my Toy Shopping dreams.
Like the man said, you can’t win unless you buy a ticket. And, unlike 99% of wannabee writers out there, you actually have a finished — no, a finished, published — no, a finishedw, published, well-reviewed book to show them.
What have you got to lose? Besides a few bucks of postage.
Hey. I play the lottery when the pot-odds make it a better than 1-1 bet. So I’ll invest in the postage to be sure. π Thanks Omir. There’s no story teller like you, man.
Belated congratulations, Joe! I read the review on another site – and just for good measure I read it again over here. It’s so damn refreshing to see good things happen to such a deserving guy. Thanks for sharing this milestone with us. That being said . . . here’s a question for ya:
Earlier in this thread you indicated that you’re not “that calculating”. Well, it seems there was a bit of calculating in your marketing process. For instance, how come you identified yourself as a Kossack in your other diary title, but you chose not to identify yourself as a Tribber in the diary title on this site? (Methinks there was some forethought in your strategy. Perhaps, what some might call “calculating”. ;^)
Aside from my most sincere best wishes, please know that the remainder of this post was nothing more than mischief. No harm intended. Just amusing myself.
P.S. What is your connection to Howell? A dear friend of mine lives there, so its mention immediately caught my eye.
And with that – good day! (Your week is certainly off to a fabulous start)
Thanks for the well-wishes. Your point about the whole “not that calculating” comment versus the “Kossack” comment. Wholly valid. Even if said in jest. Sometimes, I think the best critiques are in jest.
I have been encouraged these last days by the cross-blog cooperation. And I’ve always been a member at Kos. So I could try to weasel out of my inconsistencies, and say it wasn’t a calculated adjective. But I’d be a liar. I definitely used that title to connect more directly with the Kossack community. (And I’m glad to have done it, not just for my book, but hopefully for future cooperation between these respective good sights). And your comment is sharp and true and taken in the good kidding manner it was intended.
In Howell, I was a judge’s clerk, a prosecutor and a criminal defense lawyer. Later a FOC Referee. Five or six years total. And a good time. It is a wonderful little community of lawyers.
I figured that’s what you had done. And I smiled at the maneuver.